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* "Inger" by Friar Dave (romance & emerging adolescence)
10, 10, 10
* "Inger" by Friar Dave (friar.dave@teamhbbs.com). Roger is a single Father who is raising a 12-year-old son. He hires Inger, an intelligent, dependable, but apparently unattractive college girl to do the housework, to help with homework, and to generally keep an eye on his son while he is at work. Bill discovers long before Roger does that Inger can really be a fox when she wants to be one. Meanwhile, Roger begins dating Bill's English teacher. Well, while Roger goes out with Bernice the English teacher, Inger notices that Bill has been running off to the bathroom to masturbate; and she asks him if it's because he's thinking about the English teacher who is with his father. Bill replies with something like, "No. I'm thinking about you, Inger. Look, I have another boner right now!" Since they have to study algebra, she helps him relax his erection before study time; and eventually she integrates their mutual physical attraction into part of an incentive system to get him to study hard. {Ooops! "Study hard" can have more than one meaning in this instance, I guess.} And so the plot thickens. I might add that giving a kid a hand job when he displays a hard-on that you have caused is not a good way to eliminate or minimize future erections. A more successful strategy would be to hit him in the groin with a baseball bat. There, that should settle you down for a while. As I said, Inger's method would not have been successful had it been her goal to minimize arousal in order to facilitate the study of algebra, which would have been a worthy goal. However, it turns out that she has needs too. And so she and Bill form a sort of Reciprocal Needs Alliance. She will scratch his back if he scratches hers - only it's not their backs that they will be scratching. This is a very good story. We get to see Roger develop his relationship with Bernice and Bill develop his with Inger, who has developed a tutoring system that manages to get the 12-year-old through calculus in just about three months! The sex is very hot. Pop quiz for Celeste: (1) Q. Should a man develop a sexual relationship with his son's English teacher? A. Sure, why not? (2) Q. Should a responsible parent hire a sexy college student and let her have sex with his 12-year-old son? A. No. A parent should screen and supervise his baby-sitter more carefully than this. If you'll pardon the expression, Roger just got lucky. Inger would be guilty of statutory rape in most jurisdictions. The judge would probably also be rough on the father for dereliction of parental responsibility. Note, however, that it's also extremely unlikely that a 12-year-old would within three months go from remedial algebra to advanced calculus - no matter what reward system the tutor employed. If a tutor could actually do this, the judge would probably give her a suspended sentence and require her to do community service - consisting of applying the same system to the judge's children or possibly to the judge himself. However, readers are advised to ignore this information and read this story as a very good fantasy. Ratings for "Inger" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |