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"Joint Therapy" by Sarlife (counseling session) 8, 6, 6
"Joint Therapy" by Sarlife (Sarlife@aol.com). --- The main problem with this story is that it's difficult to decide how seriously to take it. I mean, a professional counselor simply would not permit one client to fuck another in a group therapy session. The counselor would call security. If nothing else, his insurance company would require him to do so. However, I COULD imagine this happening in an uncensored version of Bob Newhart, with Bob responding in a flustered way while two clients go at it with vigor. However, in even in that case I'd still like to see the grammar cleaned up and some more personality injected into the story. Ratings for "Joint Therapy" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 6 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 6 |