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"Remembering When" by Anne Arbor (emerging sexuality) 10, 10, 10
"Remembering When" by Anne Arbor (AnneArbor@my-dejanews.com). --- I don't know what possesses lovers to demand that their partners tell them about their "first time." I think we deserve a little privacy in our memories. And maybe our original lover deserves some privacy and respect too. This isn't a biggie to me. The no-pain rule in the previous review and no- fantasizing-about-close-friends-whose-lives-we-may-complicate-while-we-screw- up-our-own rules are much more important. I just think comparisons to other people - even implicit comparisons - can be unpleasant. They can come back and haunt you ten months later, when somebody decides to say something unpleasant and digs up dirt from the past. Anyway, in this story Anne describes her gradual escalation with her boyfriend through the final stages of heavy petting and into intercourse. It's very sexy stuff. Ratings for "Remembering When" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 7 |