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"Confessions" by John Galt (mild bdsm) 10, 8, 7
"Confessions" by John Galt (paladin_cs@email.msn.com). --- About six months ago I wrote a story within my review of DG's "The Call of Desire." In that story I waxed eloquent about how I made love to my husband while I was talking to another woman on the phone. I invited other authors to pick up the story, and several of you did so. This is a delayed response to my invitation. In this story I {the fictional Celeste, that is} confess to my husband that Rose had stayed on the phone line and had been giving me instructions while I gave my husband a blowjob and then let him take me in the ass. My husband responds {in the present story} with some mild bdsm. It's pretty sexy stuff, and I suspect that those of you who get high on bdsm will enjoy it even more than I did. However, since this story involves my fictional persona, I can't help personalizing it a little and responding as I would in real life. If I confessed something problematic to my husband, he damned well had better either (1) forgive me, (2) see a counselor with me, (3) be kidding when he "punishes" me, or (4) some combination of the above. I really don't get high at all on the infliction of pain, even if it's "only" a spanking. If he wants to "punish" me by making me do something that more prudish people would consider to be dirty - in other words, punish me by giving me pleasure - I'd feel comfortable with that. But possibly because of my work with people who have been abused, I would have a hard time liking a person who thought it necessary to hurt me, and I'd have a hard time making love with a person I didn't like. This is still a good story. But the author forced me to personalize it, and that personalization affects the ratings. Ratings for "Confessions" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 7 |