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* "He Doesn't (Love Her Like I Do)" by Uther Pendragon
(emerging adolescence) 10, 10, 10
* "He Doesn't (Love Her Like I Do)" by Uther Pendragon (an569889@anon.penet.fi). This story is written from a most unusual perspective - from the viewpoint of a dog who belongs to a young girl going through adolescence. We see most of the sexual activity only indirectly - we have to surmise it through the mind of the dog, who draws most of his conclusions by looking and sniffing. The girl cries a lot, has different smells on her fingers and in her crotch, and occasionally rubs bouillon into her body for Wiggles to lick out while she moans gently. It must have been a challenging task to write an entire story from this perspective; but the author carries it off beautifully. I truly enjoyed this story. Ratings for "He Doesn't (Love Her Like I Do)" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |