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"A Lipstick Called . . . BLACKMAIL!" by PleaseCain (femdom)
6, 10, 9
"A Lipstick Called . . . BLACKMAIL!" by PleaseCain (pleasecain@aol.com). Guest review by Bronwen. PleaseCain has a story menu at The Mexican housekeeper walks into her employer's bedroom and finds the teenage son of the house there alone. He's wearing (and jerking off into) the sexiest pair of Mommy's panties he can find. The housekeeper blackmails him into submitting to humiliation, into satisfying her, and eventually into becoming the toy for a group of her male friends. The transition from the outset, when our wealthy college boy hero has only ventured a toe into the waters of feminization, to the end when, in wig and black lace teddy, he actively seeks out his tormentors, is smoothly handled. The description is good, and the whole set-up is convincing (apart from the butt-fucking - I suspect the author may not have personal experience). I appreciated the characterization (scanty, but there). The writer doesn't describe his characters in list form - so common a flaw in ASS - "My name's Candy, I'm blonde, 5' 3" and wear a 36b bra" - you know the gubbins - he lets them and the settings emerge through the narrative. It's well put together. I was impressed with this story. The version I saw was unformatted - a major turn-off for me - but I persevered and it was worth it. Some words had run together, creating charming new ones like 'sheletgo and 'pairofundies'. That was one hurdle. The other was the subject. TG, feminization, femdom - none of these are my cup of tea - yet I could see the excitement through the eyes of the narrator. I enjoyed it. If these *are* your turn-ons I suspect you'll really love it! One personal aside - would the author please refrain in future from describing tidy drawers in such excruciating detail. Gave me the glums for a good half hour! (chaos is winning in my house - found a pet rat in a sock drawer yesterday.) Ratings for "Lipstick Called BLACKMAIL!" Athena (technical quality): 6 (marks off for format) Venus (plot & character): 10 Bronwen (appeal to reviewer): 9 |