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"The Shower" by Tiramisu (shower sex). R'khaan: 4, 4, 4 {Unarchived} "The Shower" by Tiramisu (no address). Guest Review by R'khaan (rkhaan@ix.netcom.com) {Unarchived} So, we have Sara and Jim, middle-aged parents who find themselves without children one night. Sara's a little cranky because Jim's been off his feed of late, being rather stingy with the one-eyed wonder worm. While pondering her daughter's relationship with a new boyfriend, Sara undresses and heads for the bathroom to speak to Jim. To her surprise, Jim's in the shower doing the knuckle shuffle; and Sara is suddenly very angry that he can find time to do himself but not her. As she watches her husband stroke himself into a pending orgasm, Sara finds she's becoming very excited at the scene before her. Girlfriend's hypnotized as Jim continues to massage himself and, despite herself, calls out to her husband. At least Jim tries to play things off, not that Sara buys it. Sara manages to surprise herself by suggesting that Jim can finish what he was doing - but he can't come until she says so. Jim agrees and allows Sara to blindfold him, as his wife's presence seemed to unnerve him. Now blindfolded, Jim proceeds to do as Sara bids, and Sara's really getting her cookies off on being able to control her hubby, as well as the sight of Jim really going for what he knows. Sara gets off and allows Jim to get off and that's the show. This story was cute, if not very original. Celestial Ratings for "The Shower" R'khaan (technical quality): 4 R'khaan (plot & character): 4 R'khaan (appeal to reviewer): 4