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"The Cruelest Month" by Hawkeye (relationships) 10, 8, 8
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"The Cruelest Month" by Hawkeye.
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This is a follow-up to "April Showers," to which BillyG gave high ratings back
in CR 272. I'll repost that review. Both stories are a part of Hawkeye's
"Seasons," and somebody named doogiewoodburner has reposted all seven stories
in this series. Good Doggie!

In this episode Sam is trying to have a long-term relationship with Lisa, but
he boinks Julie again in the shower one fine Sunday morning. The title refers
to the fact that "breaking up is hard to do." Or, as T.S. Eliot more aptly
put it in The Waste Land

April is the cruelest month, breeding
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
Memory and desire, stirring
Dull roots with spring rain.

Of course, the previous story in this series {April Showers} was a play on the
words by the more popular but less known poet who wrote

April showers
Bring May flowers.

I've come to two realizations. First, the reason college tuition is so high
is that college guys spend so much time in the showers with the hot water
running while they masturbate or occasionally play sex games with their lady
friends. Second, although this story is not all that good as a stand-alone,
the overall "Seasons" series is an excellent story of a young man's sexual
odyssey.

So if you read this story at all, read it in the right order with the rest in
the series. And thanks again, doogiewoodburner.

Ratings for "The Cruelest Month"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 8
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8