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* "Break Room" by RC (masturbation, voyeurism, & bdsm) 10, 10, 10
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* "Break Room" by RC (74734.271@CompuServe.COM).
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Jean and two of her coworkers have been assigned to a night shift that
requires little real exertion. One of them routinely goes to the break room
and takes a nap. One night Jean awakens from her nap and realizes that she
has become bound to the wall. Shannon is standing in front of her,
masturbating herself to orgasm. The sight of her coworker approaching her
climax at first makes Jean anxious, but then she herself becomes very horny.
She tries to break free - at first to escape from the threatening situation;
but soon her focus becomes more on wanting to relieve herself sexually.
Shannon finishes, and then Traci comes into the room and does a repeat
performance. As if this has not been enough, both Shannon and Traci next
appear together in front of their captive coworker and make passionate love to
each other. When her coworkers finally set her free, Jean rips off her
clothes, jumps their bodies, and joins the orgy herself.

I have no intention of ever doing this myself. I was going to say that I had
no INTEREST, but as I read this story I realized that wasn't true. I would
honestly take legal action against anyone that did to me what Traci and
Shannon did to Jean, but I really enjoyed the story. If I dream about this
tonight, I'll roll over and grab my husband; I won't even classify the dream
as a nightmare. I strongly recommend this well-written story.

Ratings for "Break Room"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10