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* "At the Pool" by Mark Aster (swimming pool sex) 10, 10, 10
* "At the Pool" by Mark Aster (MyFrThAl@aol.com). Sometimes I suspect that the plots for some of these stories are not very realistic. Take this one, for example. Do you think that a guy in his middle twenties would really go to a swimming pool and relax with his pregnant girlfriend at his side and lust after a high school girl with shapely tits and a nice ass and legs that won't quit who is serving her community as a lifeguard? And if the couple did go to the pool together and if the guy really did feel horny whenever he looked at the lifeguard and if he did express his fantasies about this young lady to his girlfriend, do you think she would really find it interesting to borrow the lifeguard's swimsuit and arrange to be alone in the pool with the guy after closing time? And even if she did do this, do you think the guy would actually get really turned on by the fantasy of making it with this cute little lass while he was really driving his throbbing cock underwater into the pulsating pussy of the lady who will bear his child? Do you find this as repulsive as I do? And anyway, how could you get the girl to loan you her swimsuit and let you into the pool - except, perhaps, by telling her what you plan to do and telling her that she can watch. Ratings for "At the Pool" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |