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"Settling Down" by Frederick T (well written porn). BitBard:
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"Settling Down" by Frederick T (an19164@anon.nymserver.com). Guest Review by Bitbard (bitbard@newsguy.com). Willy Tamarak is a continuing adventure story, or I should say continuing porno story. What makes this series interesting is that it's well written porno. The plots (if any) are merely an excuse for everyone to get naked; and the characters wouldn't know a dilemma, unless it was choosing between taking it (or stuffing it) up the cunt or ass. However this is not necessarily a bad thing at all. Sometimes you want a deep and profound story, and sometimes you just want a story that will grab you by the balls (or other areas) and inspire a blind lust. Tamarak fills the second niche and does it well. Since this story is part of a larger series it can be a bit confusing to those who have not followed the previous stories. Take for instance this sentence from chapter 1: "Carol Whitouski (WT-A#4,8A/B,12, SL-Ch3, WT-T#13) was just keeping up with traffic." At first I thought she had really weird measurements; then the proverbial light-bulb clicked on, and I realized that Frederick was telling me where she had appeared before. Fans of the series will like this continuation: it maintains a high level of quality with minimal need for thought outside how fast you should move your hand. I rather suspect that new readers will find the story too difficult to get into, although I would urge them to look up the earlier stories. (*) I'm marking the scores for the fans of the series with a warning that as a continuation new readers will not find an easy story to get into. Ratings for "Settling Down" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 (*) Bitbard (appeal to reviewer): 10 (*) |