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"The Shoplifter" by Diamond Joe (justifiable fuckicide) 7, 4, 3
"The Shoplifter" by Diamond Joe () A guy catches a teenager shoplifting and is going to report her to her police. She doesn't want that to happen. She'll do ANYTHING...PLEASE!!! As the narrator says, "Anything is a huge concept." So he makes her give him a blowjob. This story is not finished. It will be continued. Oh, boy! A slight technical note: Raping a teenager for shoplifting is not legal anywhere outside Iran. However, lots of guys seem to get their rocks off with this sort of fantasy. I guess it eases their consciences. A long time ago an author named TEX ripped into this concept. He pushed the concept further by having the perpetrator of the rape himself get gang-raped in prison. This is nowhere near as good as TEX's story. In fact, it's nowhere near as good as almost anything. Ratings for "The Shoplifter" Athena (technical quality): 7 Venus (plot & character): 4 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 3 |