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"A Most Unusual Afternoon" by Crimson Dragon (unusual bdsm)
10, 10, 10
"A Most Unusual Afternoon" by Crimson Dragon (dcrimson@yahoo.com). When I labeled this story "unusual bdsm," I didn't mean "really kinky bdsm." What I meant was that this was a bondage story that is just not your usual sort of bondage story. Darlene and Darren are twin siblings who are seniors in high school. Darlene has asked her brother to do a favor for her, a favor that he only reluctantly grants. Through the first half of the story the author tantalizes us while we try to figure out what the favor is. Then we find Darlene bound naked in her bed, and we still don't ever really know what's going to happen. I got all the way to the end of the story, and almost none of the things that I expected to happen had occurred in this story. And I'm glad they didn't. Some of those things would have made a good story, but this one was just fine too. Ratings for "A Most Unusual Afternoon" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |