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"Melissa" by Mark Aster (family reunion non-sex)
10, 10, 10
"Melissa" by Mark Aster (MyFrThAl@aol.com). Our Hero is at a family gathering, where he encounters the lithe and lovely, lewd and lascivious Melissa, a veritable vision to his aging eyes. When Melissa takes a break to take a leak, Pat emerges from the shrubbery with the news that Melissa is only fourteen years old. I'll spoil the surprise ending for you: Our Hero breaks it off short of having going for a ride in her fur- lined canoe. This is about the hottest non-sex I have seen around here in a long time. One interesting side-note. My husband reported to me several years ago that caring for a baby in public is better than a good pick-up line as a way for a guy to meet attractive young women. Our Hero expands this theory by using twins. Ratings for "Melissa" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |