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"Surprise" by Damya. [This story is unarchived and is now officially lost to history] "Surprise" by Damya. [This story is unarchived and is now officially lost to history] I never used to get high on the idea of watching my husband fuck somebody else, nor did I like the idea of doing it while he watched. But we talked it over several years ago, and we agreed that it would actually be stimulating to watch the other make it with someone else - as long as the possibility of disease could be avoided (which, of course, is possible, in imaginary worlds). It would be stimulating for us, but impossible in reality, since we see so much value in our monogamous relationship. (To me, the fact that I share this wonderful experience with my husband and with him alone makes it by definition impossible to invite another party into the relationship.) So we've settled for an active fantasy life, where he sometimes talks to me about what he'd like to do to a woman in a movie or on the street, and I do the same for him. Now back to the story - I guess I'm making the point that I see problems inherent in the plot; but if I weren't so fortunate as to have this really great bargain relationship, I have to admit that the basic idea behind this plot sounds good. There are lots of good spouse watching stories, but this one doesn't quite make it for me. The author says she's writing it for her boyfriend; and it might have served that purpose really well. If so, I hope they get their bang for their buck. But there are better wife watching stories this one. The reasons to read this story are (1) to find enjoyment in hearing about an interesting situation or (2) to get really turned on while reading it. I don't think either outcome is really all that likely. On the other hand, the story is not awful either. It just somehow failed to give me as a woman the vicarious experience of driving my husband into sexual heaven by letting him watch me do exciting things to someone else. I hope Damya herself had better luck. (Rating: 5).