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"Bank" by Deirdre.
"Bank" by Deirdre. My word processor tells me that this story was only 830 words long, but with those few words the author did a really nice job of creating a mood. What's best about the story is that Deirdre shows excellent restraint: she creates a mood and tells us this story without going overboard and trying to make more of the incident than there really was to it. Other writers would be tempted to work in some four-letter words and at least a couple of orgasms and to follow the formula for a good sex story; but Deirdre just relates this anecdote in a way that made me think of comparable things that had happened to me during my own early adolescence. (Rating: 9). |