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"Mandala" by Oscar Paco (ASS sex) Ivan: 10, 10, 10
"Mandala" by Oscar Paco (oscarpaco@aol.com). Guest reviewed by Poison Ivan. If I understand it correctly, a mandala is a visual object used as a meditation aid. The meditation aid in this particular story is Mandala Winter's asshole. The narrator of this story arrives at Mandala's house, where Miss Winter does several shocking things. Before he knows it, he has his tongue buried between her ass cheeks. This is a very short story, but Oscar Paco packs a lot into just a few words. I got a clear view of the surroundings and of Mandala herself. And there is a very nice sense of the narrator being over-run by an overwhelming woman. I highly recommend this story. If you're not squicked by oral-anal contact, check it out. Ratings for "Mandala" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Ivan (appeal to reviewer): 10 |