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"Pool Story" by Immcollect (Wet Sex) BitBard 9, 9, 9
"Pool Story" by Immcollect (immcollect@aol.com). Guest review by BitBard (bitbard@newsguy.com). Have you ever made love outdoors or in a pool? If you have, or even if you haven't, you'll probably enjoy this erotic scene. Of course when you make love in the open like that there's always the chance that someone will see you and the woman in this story finds an additional thrill at performing for a very interested audience while she and her significant other churn the waves. The story was one long paragraph, and so it was a bit exhausting to read; but it was short, and oddly the lack of breaks may have made the sex scene even more appealing. Still the lack will impact Athena slightly. Venus is rated on sex since this is just a scene. And as for Appeal, let's just say I have no prejudices against wet and slippery sex. Ratings for "Pool Story" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 9 Bitbard (appeal to reviewer): 9 |