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"It Is Me" by H.D. Meister (Power Trip) BitBard: 9, 8, 1
"It Is Me" by H.D. Meister (dez187lm@hotmail.com). Guest Review by BitBard (bitbard@newsguy.com) This is a short story of a guy proclaiming what he has become to a girl he is abusing. Anyone who loves to totally dominate someone, anyone who can merge hatred, lust, and sex, anyone who's idea of absolute satisfaction is to give an impassioned gloating sermon to a cowering victim will probably love this story. That anyone, however, is not me. Ratings for "It Is Me" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 8 Bitbard (appeal to reviewer): 1 "Dr Phil E Good and the Shy Southern Girl" by Rock Hancock (rock_hancock@hotmail.com). Guest Review by BillyG A brief but substantive suspension of belief is all one needs to enter into this sexual game of playing doctor. Our licentious physician, Phil, sees Miss Scarlet Lee as the last patient of the day, just after sending his nurse home. Her nebulous complaints of course necessitate stripping her clothes that she might receive a proper examination. In predictable fashion, credibility aside, Dr. Phil first massages then sucks her breasts in the successful treatment of, get this, low back pain. That he'll find reason to examine and then suck Miss Scarlett's clit is a given. Finally, for the finale, our naughty physician trots out his version of the BFG and administers good old Dr. Phil's hot beef injection. It's agreed by the doctor and the patient that this therapy is so effective, they'll need to set up an every-other-day therapeutic schedule. Eroticism is closely linked to believable and identifiable scenarios. This story strays so far from creditability that we're left a little embarrassed by the characters' impossible naivete. It's light hearted and well written, but the paper-thin plot leaves one thinking, "Oh, come ON." Ratings for "Dr Phil E Good and the Shy Southern Girl" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 6 BillyG (appeal to reviewer): 7 |