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"The Wimp" by a mature, Curious submissive male who Forgot to
attach his name (humiliation) 4, 3, 3
"The Wimp" by a mature, Curious submissive male who Forgot to attach his name (Story@femdom.com). The author starts out by saying, "Some times I wish i married an ugly submissive slut. Maybe then i would get some pussy and wouldnt be such a pussy." There's a 60's song along those same general lines, but it has better punctuation and focuses more on culinary skills. Here's a summary of the plot: "You mean i have to jerk off and eat my own cum?" Yes, indeed he does. Imagine that. The author concludes with this epitaph - er, epilogue: "This was my first attempt at writing so I hope you Like it. If you dont then don't read it again." Fair enough. I advise you to do him one better. Ratings for "The Wimp" Athena (technical quality): 4 Venus (plot & character): 3 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 3 |