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* "A Hot Summer's Night" by Ann Douglas (ff romance)
10, 10, 10
* "A Hot Summer's Night" by Ann Douglas (annd55@nyc.pipeline.com). Mr. Smith was a mortician. One day Old Herman died, and his body was brought to Mr. Smith's establishment. When he undressed the body, he was impressed with the size of the male member of the deceased. Old Herman had apparently died while having at least a happy thought. Mr. Smith said to himself, "Nobody will believe this!" and then he had an idea. He simply hacked off the penis and placed it in a small box. After he finished preparing the body for burial, he headed home, where he was greeted by Mrs. Smith. He handed her the box, saying, "You'll never believe what I have in here." Mrs. Smith opened the box, took a quick look, and exclaimed, "Omigod! Old Herman is dead!" This story is completely unrelated to my joke, except that Old Herman, the building superintendent, has died. Rachel meets Toni, the new superintendent, and quickly discovers that both of them had given head to Old Herman before his untimely demise. One good turn deserves another, and soon the two ladies are making love. The story is well written, and the sex is tender and passionate - there's not much more I can say about it. This was an excellent story. Ratings for "A Hot Summer's Night" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |