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* "Coach" by Uncle Mike (sitcom parody) 10, 9, 9
* "Coach" by Uncle Mike (fr582@cleveland.Freenet.Edu). Christine has planned a surprise for Hayden. She has left a provocative note inside a special issue of Playboy Magazine, and now she has sneaked into his office, wearing nothing but a trench coat and a smile. She has locked the doors, and now she springs the surprise upon him. Actually, SHE's the one who is surprised. It's not Hayden there behind the Playboy centerfold, but Dauber, who gives her cunt the ride of her life. This short piece is good - but it's not among Uncle Mike's best. Ratings for "Coach" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9 |