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"Myrtle Beach Vacation" by tonytony3 (husband/wife fantasy)
10, 10, 10
"Myrtle Beach Vacation" by tonytony3 (tonytony3@juno.com). Guest review by BitBard (bitbard@newsguy.com). Hmm. Here's an interesting dilemma. Celeste has sent me a story to review that is complete and intact yet is basically unreadable because it uses smart quotes that come across as really weird characters on the screen. Now ASSM and Dejanews have this story, but only the first part and in a browser the story is readable (though I still hate smart quotes). Since the second part is unpublished at the time of this review I will review the first part only. This is not a problem since the first part can stand on it's own as a complete story. Dotty and Bob are married. Dotty has just taken a company sponsored assertiveness training course. Dotty is a new woman -- asking things and doing things quite unlike her usual demure self. One of the things she asks is if Bob has ever screwed around. Wow! Talk about assertive! Well since their marriage is so solid they both admit to coming close but never doing the deed. Then they describe in detail what happened. Bob had been sitting in the airport with a business acquaintance and her husband when the woman drags his hand up her thigh and lo and behold her husband's right there too! Bob begged off and ran home to Dotty. Now Dotty got the ol' sexual harassment at the office treatment and got quite a handful (if I were the guy I'da sued for sexual harassment for leaving me hanging like that.) So then Dotty and Bob go and act out Dot's encounter and have heaps of fun. So much fun in fact that they begin to wonder what to do about acting out Bob's encounter? That, dear reader, is a question for part two. You'll be much better off reading this story in your browser, following the links above than in your newsreaders. The smart quotes make the story very unreadable in native Usenet form. If you do read this story in your browser I think you'll be pleasantly surprised. The sexy talk and re-enactment between husband and wife is very hot and quite provocative. The two men one women element will ad a touch of the taboo but in part one it shouldn't cause any serious problems for guys (or gals) who like things one-on-one. Ratings for "Myrtle Beach Vacation " Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Bitbard (appeal to reviewer): 10 |