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"Amy Visits for the Summer" by Sundance (sex with babysitter)
9, 8, 9
"Amy Visits for the Summer" by Sundance. Guest review by DG. This story is billed as being the first post ever by the author, and if that is true, this is an impressive debut. The plot of the story is a well-used one - the narrator, a man in his thirties, is attracted to the babysitter. What makes the story enjoyable is the author's vivid description of the teenage girl who has just grown into a vibrant, beautiful woman, as well as the plausible way in which she and the man interact. It's not a perfect story - there are some tired plot cliches and some minor technical problems, but the story as a whole is very readable. I am looking forward to seeing more from this author. I recommend this story to anyone not squicked by an encounter between a slightly underage (but fully developed) girl and an older man. Ratings for "Amy Visits for the Summer" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 8 (Good characters, tired but serviceable plot) DG (appeal to reviewer): 9 |