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"Saleswhore" by Phil Phantom () 9.5
"Saleswhore" by Phil Phantom () 9.5 Phil Phantom/Tiffany have written some of the hottest and depraved incest stories for years. The theme of verbal and physical domination (though not in the typical D/S sense!) is usually in there somewhere, and this story is no exception. Phil is at his best when he's convinced you that his good-girl protagonist has finally been won over to the Dark Side by lust and never- before displayed, repressed incestuous affections. Synopsis: A woman is told that her career will flourish if she acts the slut and helps to get her kids into the action, too. This is a classic tale of descent into depravity. If you've ever liked a Phil Phantom story before, stop reading right here and go find this story. This is a long story by most measures, and one might expect this would give plenty of room to get into the characterization of our Saleswhore and what it is about pissing, muff-diving, and incest that really makes her tick. We get a healthy dose of this kind of plotting early on, but somewhere in the middle of the story, the transition to crazed slut gets glossed over a bit. The characterization of the kids involved is far weaker, too, at that point. The original arc of the storyline never gets completed the way one would expect coming from Phil Phantom. That doesn't mean it isn't pretty great "as is", so I'll stop griping. Rating for "Saleswhore": 9.5 |