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"The Analyst" by Victor Ramierez (plotless hypnotism) 7, 5 ,4
"The Analyst" by Victor Ramierez (lovecannibal@hotmail.com). Guest Review by BillyG (hayden@mindless.com). --- I suppose it's whatever floats your boat and of course, taste is a personal thing. If one views considerate humanness, tenderness, affection and seduction as dull, boring, time-wasting and not within hailing distance of excitement, then it's likely that "The Analyst" may appeal. The mind control of hypnotism provides a near-instant, no-fuss, and certainly a no-rejection path to non-consensual manipulation of beautiful young teachers and students in a girls' school. The tale is not encumbered with plot, character development, moral dilemma or resolution. There's an efficient paucity of story between scenes. It moves with great speed from one non-consensual medical exam to the next, replete with hidden cameras and one-way-glass. It's not all superficial hurry. The details of the medical examination - particularly the rectal thermometers and gynecological procedures - are offered with graphic detail. My appreciation of this story and consequently my review suffer from my take on such a tale. I found it a poorly written story without plot that attempts to find value in repetitious accounts of sexual exploitation. Ratings for "The Analyst" Athena (technical quality): 7 (too many easily corrected errors) Venus (plot & character): 5 (a one-trick pony) BillyG (appeal to reviewer): 4 |