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"Further Down the Isle" by Frenchy the Third (sexual relationships)
9, 9, 9
"Further Down the Isle" by Frenchy the Third (frenchyiii@hotmail.com). Guest review by Bitbard (formerly Sandman -- bitbard@newsguy.com) This story is a continuation of ""Down the Aisle". Although I have never read the previous story, the Author included a short synopsis of what has come before. Mostly this involves a lot of rules a woman agrees to before she gets married. The rules seemed a bit one-sided in the guy's favor, and indeed this story begins a few years down the road when the wife simply isn't having much fun. (Maybe she should have insisted on a few rules of her own!) It turns out I wasn't the only one thinking this! Apparently Twany's (the wife) bridesmaid, Wendy, has fallen on hard times and has to move in for a while. Wendy dresses the husband down for ignoring Twany's needs in the relationship. And the husband finds out it's not a great hardship to show some consideration. In fact, it's quite fun actually. And it turns out living with two women is no great hardship at all. In fact, one could even envy the guy. This was a rather well written sexcapade that had some nice things to say about relationships and making sure everyone has fun. Ratings for "Further Down the Isle" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 9 Bitbard (appeal to reviewer): 9 |