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"Heat" by E.Z. Riter (friendly sex) 10, 9, 10
"Heat" by E.Z. Riter (ezriter@hotmail.com). Review by Sven the Elder, who may be contacted at Sven@brass-neck.demon.co.uk. This is a story of a hot, erotic, passionate dalliance between two lovers. It is a very well written sketch. A short piece, its use of effective language is excellent. Initially I found the use of Śhim1 slightly distracting. However, I am notorious for reading very quickly and found that a short Śrewind1 and a slower appraisal solved the problem. I can envisage that if this were read as a shared experience between two good friends, the friendship might well move to explore new limits before the 'experience' were concluded. Ez tells us this is a tale that he found on his hard disk - EZ - please look for any more that might be lurking there. I certainly enjoyed this piece. Ratings for "Heat" Athena (technical quality): 10 - Excellent Venus (plot & character): 9 - Tight, concise, might have been a little more developed Sven (appeal to reviewer): 10 - Has been added to my personal collection. |