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"June 10 1998" by Jim Keigel (sexual diary) 10, 9, 9
"June 10 1998" by Jim Keigel (jimkeigel@hotmail.com). Review by Nick (e-mail nick@cassandra.demon.co.uk). -- {Note: If you enjoy this story, you can find a new segment posted each week, clearly labeled in a.s.s. and a.s.s.m.} This story is part of a series of stories, none of which I had read before doing this review. From the preamble, it seems that the author intends to set up a website with a series of similar stories. The story itself has little in the way of plot, but I don't think that is the intention. It consists of a description of a guy and a girl just doing what comes naturally, nothing more. No message, no pretensions, which is fine. There is minimal build-up. The "hero" goes to a bar with a couple of friends, which is full of young women. He selects one of these and they have sex together. It doesn't dwell on huge pricks or tits, but rather techniques and pleasure. I found it rather like browsing through Penthouse - quite pleasant, but not much depth. That isn't to detract from the writer or people who would enjoy it more, it's just my personal preference. I expect, however, that a pretty substantial fan club will be built up for more of the same kind of thing, and I wish the author luck with his website. My own ratings for this are: Technique 8 - I lost concentration and found myself rereading bits. Plot/character/erotic content 8 - I don't see it setting the world alight, but it was OK. Appeal to me 6 - I personally would not have read it all the way through if I wasn't reviewing it. Adjusted Celestial Ratings for "JUNE 10 1998" Athena (Technique) - 10 Venus (Plot/Character) - 9 Appeal (General) - 9 |