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"Good Fences Make Good Neighbors," by Phil Phantom (bdsm)
8, 8, 7
"Good Fences Make Good Neighbors," by Phil Phantom (contact via mrdouble@mrdouble.com) (F/F/f, slavery, inc, pedo) 8, 8, 7. Guest ) (F/F/f, slavery, inc, pedo) 8, 8, 7. Guest Review by R'khaan (rkhaan@ix.netcom.com) This is the first story I've read from this author, and I don't know much about him. However, I like the way he gets you right to the action. We have Gena, a married woman, thirtysomething, with four boys of varying ages. On the other side of the fence, we have Sue, recently divorced, with an eleven-year-old named Cathy. Phil starts his story with Gena bringing Sue a "divorce gift." Sue and Gena aren't exactly friendly neighbors but Sue accepts the gift just the same, suddenly feeling the need for female companionship. However, Sue's in for a surprise as she opens the box and finds a "do it yourself" kit for girls, complete with BenWa balls and butt plug. Sue's a little slow closing the box, only managing to do so after young Cathy has seen the contents. Sue's reluctant to discuss the contents with Cathy; however, Gena intervenes and manages to convince Sue to allow her to explain the items to Cathy. Phil goes off at this point in the story as Gena engages in a very graphic discussion with Cathy who shocks her mother with some pretty saucy knowledge, admitting that she had seen Gena and her husband John doing the horizontal bop. If this wasn't enough, Sue then learns that her little girl has been eating Gena's snatch after fucking John and, from there, all hell breaks loose as Gena begins using the toys meant for Sue on Cathy, who's down for the whole deal. While Cathy's enjoying herself with her mom's toys, Gena takes Sue over to one side and sucker punches her by announcing that she and John are child molesters. If this wasn't enough, Gena has the balls to announce that they want to make Cathy their love slave and that Sue will go along with it --or else. After some girl/girl stuff with Cathy, Sue decides that she's going to play the game - but not as Gena thinks. Sue puts up some token resistance before turning her daughter - and herself - over to Gena and her crew, who are out back tearing down the fence between their homes. Throughout the entire story, you keep from getting the impression that Sue, the poor deluded, horny thing, is both repulsed and excited by all of this. There's a lot of pussy-licking, cum-sucking, butt fucking action. Sue even seems to be submissive when caves in to Cathy's demands that her mother eats her pussy - but won't return the favor. And I thought kids were taught to share… This story was relatively well written despite some obvious spelling errors. Ratings for "Good Fences Make Good Neighbors" R'khaan (technical quality): 8 R'khaan (plot & character): 8 R'khaan (appeal to reviewer): 7 |