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"Descent of a Woman" by Kim (island orgy) 10, 9, 10
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"Descent of a Woman" by Kim (Ghost@nym.alias.net). Guest review by
Bronwen (bronwen@anon.nymserver.com).
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This is a late review, all my fault. Sorry. OTOH, such eons have
elapsed that Kim will surely now repost the story, which can only be a
good thing. What an enjoyable piece....

This is another of the stories written for Malinov's Island, a site
created by the marvelous (and prolific) author, Lord Malinov.

For those not familiar with the idea, the ball was set rolling by a
story from DG in which all the regular authors from ASS/ASSM set off on
an erotic writers cruise and were shipwrecked, ending up on Malinov's
tropical island. Lots of other authors wrote connected stories. Anyone
is more than welcome to submit stories related to this scenario - check
the site out at
http://www.gslink.com/~dcain/xanadu/erotica/island/

My first impressions of "Descent of a Woman" weren't so good. The first
little section seems frankly a bit superfluous. Not entirely connected
with the main thrust, if you'll forgive the pun. But maybe
(probably?) I'm missing something.

However once our heroine arrives on the island the story takes off big
time. What fun! It's not fair to give away much plot, save that it's
weird and wonderful. Dazzling creativity. Piles of mythological
allusions and a few really good jokes.

This is one of Kim's best stories yet. There's not a lot of sex, but I
found what there was memorably erotic. Read it for yourself.

Ratings for "Descent of a Woman"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 9
Bronwen (appeal to reviewer): 10