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"A City Situation" by Watcher (business romance) 10, 8, 8
"A City Situation" by Watcher (llxzt@hotmail.com). The man had the hots for a woman working for a company with whom he was doing business; and so he got her transferred to work on the account, with the hope of getting into her pants. The previous day he had thrown a party and had invited her; but she had left in a huff, when she discerned that she was being used. The story focuses on the man's thoughts as he walks the three blocks to her apartment in the heat to return the dress she had left at his place. "This guy's an asshole," I thought. "I hope he doesn't score." He doesn't, but then why is this a sex story? Ratings for "A City Situation" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |