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* "Dating Ritual" by Michael K. Smith (rough adolescent sex) 10, 10, 10
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* "Dating Ritual" by Michael K. Smith (mksmith@metronet.com). {Link:
http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=237591430} This is a vivid description
of a date during which the fifteen-year-old girl is forced by peer pressure to
engage in sex that isn't very pleasant for her. I'm sure many people will
read this as a description of a really great date or of the "good ole days."
I found it to be a brutally realistic but sad story. I never went out on a
date with a boy who forced me into anal sex or made me lick his cock clean
after he stuck it into my ass. {I might add that although I myself enjoy
consensual anal sex; anal rape is likely to be painful and unhealthy. The
anal orifice doesn't self-lubricate during arousal, as does the pussy; and so
when some jerk forces himself in, the activity is likely to tear tissue. This
may sound like fun; but it can lead to medical problems. In addition, anal
rape in real life is a very good way to get and give AIDS.} I never dated
anyone just to prove that I could take his cock just as well as any other slut
could. I know girls who acted like that, and I don't know any of them who
look as happy at this time of life as I feel. I guess I'm lucky I bought into
my parents' system of morality and self respect.

I try not to do moral lectures, and I know there are no teenagers reading this
review or this story. Here is my lecture. Don't do what they do in this
story. Have sex only with someone you love and trust. But it's OK to read
this story as soon as you're old enough so that nobody is breaking any laws.

This is still a good story. I just suggest that you think twice if you think
this sounds like a lot of fun. I don't think the author saw it that way, nor
did I.

Ratings for "Dating Ritual"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10