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"Office Girl" by Parker (blackmail & white slavery) 10, 10, 9
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* "Office Girl" by Parker (an210088@anon.penet.fi).
http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=359201405

The college girl has accepted a boring summer job. Someone from another
company offers her a large amount of money for some survey results. She
agrees to the terms, but she gets caught stealing the information. Either she
must do what her superiors demand or they will report her to the police. She
has become that saddest wretch of a.s.s. - the moral (or immoral) equivalent
of the trapped tenant farmer or coal miner locked into the company store; she
has become a sex slave. The story describes in detail some creative forms of
humiliation to keep the girls ensnared in what used to be called white
slavery.

After I originally posted this review (consisting of the preceding paragraph),
somebody asked me why I didn't object to this story, as I often do to stories
that portray degradation. The reason is simple: Parker portrays this young
woman as realistically degraded. He does not try to foist off on us the
notion that she has somehow reached a higher level of self-actualization by
letting people humiliate her. She's been seduced in a demonically clever way.
That's sad, but it's also interesting; and that's what makes this a pretty
good story.

Ratings for "Office Girl"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9