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"Pool Table" by ALS135 (Pool Sex). "Pool Table" by ALS135 (ALS135@aol.com). Guest review by Sven the Elder, who may be contacted at Sven@brass-neck.demon.co.uk. This story is basic, in fact a description of basic raw anal sex. There is little in the way of plot, other than the description of the act. We learn little of the characters, less of the what's and why-fores of the occurrence. In the end, the description tends towards the mechanical, as does the act. There is little to excite the reader unless a blunt rather terse description is your thing. I have nothing against anal sex, indeed one day I may even get the chance to try it, who knows. From this, frankly rather brutal description, it not only sounds unpleasant, but also dangerous. It has to be said that the recipient does appear to enjoy it though. If a fairly terse description is your turn on, this may be for you, as you may guess, as it stands it does little for me. Ratings for "Pool Table" Athena (technical quality): 8 - it meets Celeste's averages. Venus (plot & character): 7 - little or none. Sven (appeal to reviewer): 8 - Sorry not my turn on.