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"Ruthie's Afternoon" by Erotales (kidnapping & sexual emeergence)
"Ruthie's Afternoon" by Erotales (Erotales@aol.com). Guest review by Dart. It's a rainy afternoon and Ruthie needs a cab. After getting splashed by three of them, she's grateful when the fourth one pulls over. It's occupied, but the occupant states his willingness to share; and after a brief conversation she gratefully accepts his offer. Too late, Ruthie realizes that she's been kidnapped. Soon, she's nude, gagged, spread-eagled, and bound to a bed in an otherwise empty room. She's pretty concerned about her situation; she's not nearly as concerned as I'd be, but perhaps I'm simply a nervous type. Very shortly, Dante joins her. He's forced into the room much as she had been, only it's his father's house; and it's upon his father's instructions that he's being sequestered with Ruthie. It seems that Dante is a twenty-eight year old virgin and since therapy hasn't solved his inability to interact with women, his father has devised this novel approach to force a solution - well, at least to force the loss of Dante's virginity, since no one is to leave the room until it's gone. Dante, being a gentlemanly type, kindly removes Ruthie's gag but is unable to release her bindings. Ruthie, vocal again, then proves to be Dante's best therapist to date, and once Dante begins to open up, Ruthie even discovers a new and deeper understanding of herself. Needless to say, Dante's father will be pleased with the outcome of Ruthie's encounter with his son, but I leave it to the reader of this nicely suspenseful story to determine who else is pleased. Ratings for "Ruthie's Afternoon" Athena (technical quality): 7 Venus (plot & character): 8 Dart (appeal to reviewer): 7 |