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"Ten" by Leanna (threesome with bondage) 10, 10, 10
"Ten" by Leanna (leanna1@hotmail.com). "Miss! Oh, miss.... That's a pretty dress." The woman looks down, self-conscious. "Thank you." "I bet it'd look pretty on the floor next to my bed." "Whap!" goes the slap on the side of his face as the woman huffs away. This scene takes place outside a bar, where the recipient of the slap has been sitting on a bench with his lady friend, getting drunk while evaluating the physiques of the women going into the bar. They are a man and a woman who have apparently never been sexually intimate with each other - just drinking companions who hang out on the street together. Then their life changes in an interesting way. Sometimes I say too much. You had better check this one out for yourself. This story is an interesting combination of a threesome and bondage, with some really great dialogue to keep it going. Ratings for "Sesame Street" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |