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* "Rain" by Mark Aster (voyeurism & sex on the beach)
10, 10, 10
* "Rain" by Mark Aster (MyFrThAl@aol.com). "Doesn't it get boring - all the time with the same guy?" That question came not from an a.s.s. pervert, but from my teenage daughter a few years ago. My answer was, "You would expect it to get boring; but surprisingly, no - not so far." I raise the same question every time I read another story in the "My Friends the Allens" series; "Isn't this going to get boring." I mean, all the author ever seems to write about is this wonderfully hot stud traveling with and servicing two well-adjusted and well-endowed young nymphomaniacs. The sex is almost invariably hot and consensual. It's gotta get boring some time. But not yet. In this episode, Our Hero reclines on a beach with one of the Allen sisters, while they watch another couple initiate and consummate passionate sex nearby. Naturally, the voyeurs get turned on as well and make passionate love themselves, as a gentle rain begins to fall on them. The description, the environment - the entire picture evoked in my mind as I read this story was really beautiful. Another excellent story! Ratings for "Rain" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |