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* "Of Fights and Fantasy" by Summer's Rose (spanking) 10, 9, 9
* "Of Fights and Fantasy" by Summer's Rose (SumersRose@aol.com). The woman wants to make love to her husband, but he has work that needs to get done. Important work - right there on his computer. "OK," says the wife; "I'll just turn off your silly ole computer!" Poof! His work is gone, and now he is free to frolic with her. Oddly enough, the guy gets upset, possibly because the computer was not in an auto-save mode. Anyway, he decides she needs a spanking; and since she has a cute little ass that reddens nicely when spanked, all of this leads to some exciting orgasms. The main shortcoming of this story is the second person (you and I) point of view. I absolutely do not see how this perspective gains anything over a third person (he and she) narrative. I am left with the impression that the author wrote this story for someone else and simply posted it without bothering to revise it for a more general audience. Other than that, it's a good story - except that if a guy really wants his wife to stop turning off his computer, he shouldn't "punish" her with multiple orgasms. It just won't work. Ratings for "Of Flights and Fantasy" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9 |