|
Return To the Celestial Review (This does NOT open a new window) Return To the Index (This does NOT open a new window) Note, to make reading multi-part stories easier, story links (links with dejanews.com or www.qz.to, NOT the review or profile links) will open up a new browser window. When you are done reading the story, or section of the story simply CLOSE the story window. |
|
"Payback - Or Life's a Beach" by Kim (Spring Orgy) 8, 8, 10
"Payback - Or Life's a Beach" By Kim (ghost@nym.alias.net) Reviewed by Fiddler. This story probably won't make much sense if you don't know the players and the situation. A number of writers on alt.sex.stories, and a smaller number of readers and reposters of stories, hang out on alt.sex.stories.d. While they have been known to discuss stories, they talk about other things more often. One activity which has become popular is the quarterly virtual orgy hosted by Lord Malinov, one of the authors. This story occurs during the spring orgy (on a tropical island) and revenges activities during the winter orgy. Kim persuades Kristen to entice Taria to a secluded part of the beach. There, Kim and Kristen tie Taria up and threaten various tortures. When Taria doesn't take those threats seriously, they resort to a toothsome twosome within her sight. Unable to join in, tied so that she cannot relieve the libido which her involuntary voyeurism induces, Taria thinks she is being tortured indeed. I'll let you find out how John Rambo gets into this. I know these authors, and enjoyed the story immensely; if you do not, it may well lose something. Kim should have sent it to a proofreader before posting, however. Celeste would withdraw my reviewer's credentials if I gave an Athena ten to a story which used "laying" for "lying." "Volunteered" for "recruited" and "attempted to try" actually bothered me more. Ratings for "Payback - Or Life's a Beach" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 8 Fiddler (appeal to this reviewer): 10 |