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"On Her Leg" by LeAnna (sexual fetish) 9, 7, 8
"On Her Leg" by LeAnna (leanna1@hotmail.com). Guest review by Tooshoes. "On Her Leg" is a very short, sentimental tale about the emotional power possessed by a fetish or a memento, in this case an ankle bracelet that binds a young woman to her lover, and transports her to their lovemaking whenever she thinks about it, looks at it, or touches it. The narration slips back and forth in time as the girl sits on a park bench amid a crowd, yet her attention centers on the ankle bracelet, which surfaces her memories of a previous night of sex. The writing is erotic and appealing, though it turns into pretty much straightforward description of the sex act towards the end. A nice, sexy little piece. Ratings for "On Her Leg" Technical: 9 Characterization and Plot: 7 Appeal: 8 |