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"The Twighlight Cafe" by Seurat (femdom revenge) 8, 4, 4
"The Twighlight Cafe" by Seurat (dantedibby@aol.com). Guest review by BillyG (hayden@mindless.com). In the genre of non-consensual stories of anger and humiliation, "The Twighlight Café" has a little something for everyone,. Unless one finds an erotic charge in these emotions, this is not an erotic tale. The author Seurat says in the preface that the story contains , ". . . sex of a semi-consensual nature; fetishistic adornments and sex toys; nasty torture for characters I didn't like; and a little plot thrown in for good measure and to separate the sex scenes." The codes of this story would best be listed as femdom, capture, forced bondage, humiliation rape and abduction. There are no animals, bathroom games, or kids. In the first few pages of the story, we're introduced to the men you love to despise - college seniors, fraternity brothers, coarse, arrogant, swaggering, braggadocio, and mean spirited. They're typecast with such exaggeration that we quickly recognize them as the fall guys. And who are they to fall to? Why the dominate femmes, of course. I almost felt a sympathetic rush that these boorish, uncouth jerks would get a healthy what for, but as the story progressed, the only difference between the boys and the ladies, besides genitalia, was the depth and sophistication of their depravity. The Mistresses, apparently rich and powerful in the extreme, have no pause in their plans to kidnap and subjugate their male subjects. Period. I mean, that's it. That's the story. This is a near-plotless story punctuated by descriptions of painful, forced bondage and subjugation without any redeeming eroticism. Ratings for "The Twighlight Cafe" Athena (technical quality): 8 (Poor formatting and lack of proofreading) Venus (plot & character): 4 BillyG (appeal to reviewer): 4 |