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"Gifts" by fcp (rekindling old love) 10, 10, 10
"Gifts" by fcp (first_category@yahoo.com). The man and his wife have lived a Norman Rockwell existence with their young son on their farm in America. Then one day, expecting hostility in return, the man tells his wife about the woman to whom he had made love during World War II; and the wife responds not with animosity but with renewed passion. The next night she takes him to the lover's lane where she had declined his passion the night before he left for the war; and this time she re-enacts her answer more favorably. These people are going to loosen up and enjoy life! This was an extremely hot and tender story. Ratings for "Gifts" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |