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"Closing Time" by David 2 (strip club orgy) 9, 9, 9
"Closing Time" by David 2 (davidm2@mindspring.nospam.com). Sarah is one of those college graduates who started stripping during college but kept it up after graduation, because she could derive a steadier income and contribute more to humanity than she could by becoming an English teacher or mayor of a small town. The Sunset Club, where Sarah works, used to be a high-priced brothel. Members were given black cards, and the guys would get their pick of the ladies. The cops shut it down about ten years ago. But the owner's brother bought the place and re-opened it as strictly a strip club. The deal he has with the city is that nothing improper is supposed to go on while the club is open for business. So until closing time, everything has to be by the book. But after hours anything goes; and our narrator has a black card with Sarah's name on it. So after the club closes the narrator has wild passionate sex with Sarah, while everybody else is fucking everybody else. Imagine that. This is clearly fantasy sex. If you've ever visited one of these clubs, you'll know that the women there are not as glamorous as Sarah and her friends. But if we can do revisionist history for "cowboys" and American Indians, I suppose we can do it for strip clubs too. Ratings for "Closing Time" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9 |