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* "A Night at Suzy's" by Mark Aster (tasteful orgy)
10, 10, 10
*"A Night at Suzy's" by Mark Aster (MyFrThAl@aol.com). It's Orgy Night at Suzy's, and the gang has prevailed upon a renowned goddess of a.s.s. to bring some high quality stories from her extensive collection to read aloud as a mood setter. By coincidence the author of Celeste's Pick of the Week happens to be present; and as luck would have it, everyone likes everyone else and a good time is had by all. I have to admit that I am flattered to become part of such a hot evening of sex, but I want to assure you that flattery in no way influences my ratings. The author knows this, and I suppose that's why he toned down my sexuality a little. No offense taken. There's not much to say about this story: read it - you'll get your bang for your buck. This author follows a practice that few others follow. He writes his story, lets a couple of weeks pass, and then revises the story before he posts it. This takes discipline, but it is often worth it. I know Mark does this, because he sent me a copy of the draft three weeks ago, asking for permission to defame me in the way he has done in this story. Ratings for "A Night at Suzy's" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |