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* "Exquisite Error" by Eric Shon (mistaken identity) 10, 10, 10
* "Exquisite Error" by Eric Shon (EricShon@aol.com). The man met the woman via email and telephone conversations. They are just good friends (not lovers), but he visits her and stays in her daughter's bedroom, since the daughter is out of town at her father's house. Since he has the same first name as the daughter's boyfriend, when the 17-year-old returns unexpectedly in the middle of the night and finds him in her bed, he has no idea how he is going to get out of this predicament, but he knows for damn sure WHAT he is going to get out of it! To learn more, you'll have to read the story. It's a good one! Ratings for "Exquisite Error" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |