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* "Dating Ritual" by Michael K. Smith (rough adolescent
sex) 10, 10, 10
* "Dating Ritual" by Michael K. Smith (mksmith@metronet.com). This is a vivid description of a date during which the fifteen- year-old girl is forced by peer pressure to engage in sex that isn't very pleasant for her. I'm sure many people will read this as a description of a really great date or of the "good ole days." I found it to be a brutally realistic but sad story. I never went out on a date with a boy who forced me into anal sex or made me lick his cock clean after he stuck it into my ass. {I might add that although I myself enjoy consensual anal sex; anal rape is likely to be painful and unhealthy. The anal orifice doesn't self-lubricate during arousal, as does the pussy; and so when some jerk forces himself in, the activity is likely to tear tissue. This may sound like fun; but it can lead to medical problems. In addition, anal rape in real life is a very good way to get and give AIDS.} I never dated anyone just to prove that I could take his cock just as well as any other slut could. I know girls who acted like that, and I don't know any of them who look as happy at this time of life as I feel. I guess I'm lucky I bought into my parents' system of morality and self respect. I try not to do moral lectures, and I know there are no teenagers reading this review or this story. Here is my lecture. Don't do what they do in this story. Have sex only with someone you love and trust. But it's OK to read this story as soon as you're old enough so that nobody is breaking any laws. This is still a good story. I just suggest that you think twice if you think this sounds like a lot of fun. I don't think the author saw it that way, nor did I. Ratings for "Dating Ritual" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |