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* "Not Quite Hidden" by Fin Haddie (exhibitionism) 9, 8, 9 http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=355961900 * "Not Quite Hidden" by Fin Haddie (sgoodman@primenet.com). David heads for the beach and is turned on by the attractive women he passes. He lies down by himself in a secluded spot and notices a woman working over her lover in the grass nearby, where they are unobserved by everyone except David. As he watches and gets turned on, the woman turns toward him; and this causes David to explode into a very pleasant orgasm. This story was posted as Florida2. I suppose it goes with the preceding story, but they are relatively independent. Even when they are combined, they are not a complete story; but the sex in each is still pretty hot. Ratings for "Not Quite Hidden" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9