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* "Funhouse" by RC (mind control) 10, 9.5, 9.5
* "Funhouse" by RC (74734.271@CompuServe.COM). If you have ever ridden the "funhouse" ride in an amusement park, you have no doubt noticed that there is a side track that does not follow the normal route. You have perhaps wondered where that track goes. The two women in this story find out. As their car nears the entrance, the female operator smiles mysteriously and pulls a lever that sends them into a dark, hypnotic area that Deirdre would be proud to call her own. This is a good story, but it does not exhaust the full potential suggested by its setup. Since it has been over three months since my last Annual Celestial Writing Contest, I hereby proclaim another. The only requirement is that the story has to include a funhouse theme. Any sort of funhouse theme that includes sex will do. Send entries to me by April 30. I'll announce the winners and review all entries shortly after the deadline. Authors will be encouraged to post their stories at that time as well. In the previous two contests we've obtained some great "Locksmith" stories and "In Flight" fantasies. I look forward to receiving your entries. If you submit early, I'll even give you feedback that might help you improve your story. Ratings for "Funhouse" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 9.5 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9.5 |