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* "Fantasies" by BitSlinger (sexual fantasies) 9, 10, 10
* "Fantasies" by BitSlinger (bitslinger@hotmail.com). I believe this is this author's first story. It's also an entry in my Celestial Christmas story contest. I am happy to have stimulated the author to enter upon a promising writing career. The basic plot is that the wife has become interested in fulfilling her husband's fantasies; but he's reluctant to share them, because he's afraid he'll scare her off. Most recently she has noticed his interest in a sexy little elf at the mall, and so tonight she has seduced him in an elf costume. Eventually she manages to pry some fantasies out of him, and she rewards him by acting them out with him and enjoying them herself. The fantasies are actually pretty tame by a.s.s. standards, but I enjoyed them. Except for a few occasional flaws in verb tenses, the author shows a good sense of timing in his integration of the fantasies and the real-time sexual activity. I look forward to seeing more stories by this author. Ratings for "Fantasies" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |